My first TOEFL essay.
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There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach an educated person.
Nowadays education is a very popular among different classes of people. Ussually good education gives a chance to have a well paid job, big house, high level insurance and of course a lot of opportunities for selfdevelopment and interaction with another great people around the world. Of course the intellect is the thing that distinguish human beings from animals during the classical paradigma. Hence some people suppose, that only educated person is able to be worthy to have title Teacher and teach an educated person. But human is not only mind. Still ancients noticed that we are not human beings having a spiritual experience. We are spiritual beings having a human experience. There are many uneducated people who can teach educated one for important and useful skills. Wisdom people from Eastern countries said that every persom we meet during our life is a Teacher for us and there are a lot of inetresting, useful and of course unbelievable greate experience that we can get from each living being. For example, my honest friend doesn`t have bachelor degree, but she is very friendly and open mind person, she tought me how to be kind, how to love people and all living beings, how to give, how to share feelings, how to listen and empathize. These skills help us to be human and understand other humans more than traditional educational programs. Its important for me.
The second example of a situation, where education is not necessary, is any traditional activity. In France there are many traditional winery. Every winery has old wine recipes. The wine-maker knows recipes from his father, who was tought by his father etc. There is no educated people, who knows that recipes! So wine-maker without degree can teach some professor in food science how to make the best wine.
Finally, education could not replace intelligent, experience, wisdom. Many examples of successful life without degree of education confirm that even a baby can teach educated person for important things. Education gives us knowledge and ability to learn, everything else we learn from the life which sending to us different teachers every day.
В своем интервью Данни Шеффилд, преподаватель колледжа в Арканзасе, рассказывая о том, каким, по его мнению, должно быть отличное эссе (сочинение)
Он полагает, что главное в написании эссе – помнить о трех ключевых моментах.
Во-первых, – это «сказать, что же собираетесь сказать», рассказать читателю, о чем же вы будете писать. И даже пояснить свою позицию уже в этом вводном абзаце.
Во-вторых, «сказать это». В этом абзаце вашего сочинения вы должны дать подробное описание, детали, специфику, статистику и т.п. того, о чем вы заявили во введении.
И в-третьих, «сказать это снова». Резюмируйте основные идеи своего эссе и подчеркните ключевые моменты, которые читатель должен усвоить.
На вопрос интервьюера, чем же все-таки отличается отличное сочинение (эссе) от просто хорошего, Шеффилд опять не разошелся с требованиями к эссе для TOEFL iBT. Отличное сочинение должно быть персонализированным, личным, а не сухим академичным. Чтобы читатель, чьи эмоции автору эссе удалось затронуть, смог сказать: «Я слышу, как ты это говоришь».
There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach an educated person.
Nowadays education is a very popular among different classes of people. Ussually good education gives a chance to have a well paid job, big house, high level insurance and of course a lot of opportunities for selfdevelopment and interaction with another great people around the world. Of course the intellect is the thing that distinguish human beings from animals during the classical paradigma. Hence some people suppose, that only educated person is able to be worthy to have title Teacher and teach an educated person. But human is not only mind. Still ancients noticed that we are not human beings having a spiritual experience. We are spiritual beings having a human experience. There are many uneducated people who can teach educated one for important and useful skills. Wisdom people from Eastern countries said that every persom we meet during our life is a Teacher for us and there are a lot of inetresting, useful and of course unbelievable greate experience that we can get from each living being. For example, my honest friend doesn`t have bachelor degree, but she is very friendly and open mind person, she tought me how to be kind, how to love people and all living beings, how to give, how to share feelings, how to listen and empathize. These skills help us to be human and understand other humans more than traditional educational programs. Its important for me.
The second example of a situation, where education is not necessary, is any traditional activity. In France there are many traditional winery. Every winery has old wine recipes. The wine-maker knows recipes from his father, who was tought by his father etc. There is no educated people, who knows that recipes! So wine-maker without degree can teach some professor in food science how to make the best wine.
Finally, education could not replace intelligent, experience, wisdom. Many examples of successful life without degree of education confirm that even a baby can teach educated person for important things. Education gives us knowledge and ability to learn, everything else we learn from the life which sending to us different teachers every day.
В своем интервью Данни Шеффилд, преподаватель колледжа в Арканзасе, рассказывая о том, каким, по его мнению, должно быть отличное эссе (сочинение)
Он полагает, что главное в написании эссе – помнить о трех ключевых моментах.
Во-первых, – это «сказать, что же собираетесь сказать», рассказать читателю, о чем же вы будете писать. И даже пояснить свою позицию уже в этом вводном абзаце.
Во-вторых, «сказать это». В этом абзаце вашего сочинения вы должны дать подробное описание, детали, специфику, статистику и т.п. того, о чем вы заявили во введении.
И в-третьих, «сказать это снова». Резюмируйте основные идеи своего эссе и подчеркните ключевые моменты, которые читатель должен усвоить.
На вопрос интервьюера, чем же все-таки отличается отличное сочинение (эссе) от просто хорошего, Шеффилд опять не разошелся с требованиями к эссе для TOEFL iBT. Отличное сочинение должно быть персонализированным, личным, а не сухим академичным. Чтобы читатель, чьи эмоции автору эссе удалось затронуть, смог сказать: «Я слышу, как ты это говоришь».
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